Opportunity is missed by most people because it is dressed in overalls and looks like work. - Thomas Edison
I think the concept got progressively stronger with each iteration. And a being able to meet a request for a caricature is a great skill to have! From a "what could tweak it higher" standpoint, I think this design SCREAMS for decorative fonts! Stuff like dafont's horror or comic options (the 100% free stuff, i.e. ok for commercial use) can be a good resource that doesn't add to the budget.Horror: https://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=110&l[]=10&l[]=1Comic: https://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=102&l[]=10&l[]=1