Promotional Video - Input Wanted

[DannyGruninger]

Hey guys, so we've been playing around here doing a quick promo video with some friends of ours that do some video work... This is the first little tid bit of what we are working on...... I was hoping I could get some input from you guys on what's cool, what needs improvement, etc. Just looking for some input so we can make the next one better. All the text work, and shirt mockups are real rough in there so we will get that changed to something nicer.



EDIT I had to take the link down for now to get permission from the editor. Thanks for the replies I will repost soon.

[jason-23]

I Can dig it! boot the text for something better like you said and the music is too techno like, dont care for it much. great shots though.

[Screened Gear]

This is my first impression. Like said the digital graphics are cheesy (test shirt comps). It really takes away from the great video work. I think you can also eliminate alot of the shots. I would have someone that does not know our industry look at it. They will be able to tell you good feed back. We know what all that stuff is for a non screen printer it may just look complicated. I think it should show your abilities. have a 50/50 mix of printing press shop videos with printed shirt samples that really show your ability. Keep in mind this is not a shop tour its a marketing piece, it should sell.

Maybe take the flash shirt smoking people will think you burned the shirt.

Sorry didn't have much time. It is done really well and with some work will be a great tool to drive business. It makes me what to do one. I really like the creative press action shots.

[Homer]

nice shop! nice shots too. who's your market? like screened said, walk ins will look at this and go wtf is all this? I just want a damn shirt. . .If you are more fulfilment, contract stuff you got a good start. shorten it up, it's a little too long.maybe a minute or so. music didn't bother me. the text effects had cheese dripping off them haha. . .it would be nice to see finsihed product. . .very nice shots though, really cool angles. . .nicely done