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Heavy on the 3-d
virgil427:
I love it that, so cool.But, the perspective of the gear is off and the right front tire of the car would be off the bullet the way it sits right now, alittle off in the front end. the reflections in the caseing are a great touch
Artelf2xs:
the bullet is off just a little too. the gear needs to be faded back to not distract from the foreground or the text. It is just to help move your eye around the design.
Again.. this is for tee-shirts not the Denver Art Museum... Kidding I really do appreciate critiques... Kinda on a budget,, a lot of what is going on besides totally improper perspective, will be altered with contrast.
yorkie:
I'm not a fan of the smoking exhaust.
I'm also not a fan of using the letter "z" to replace the letter "s".
Donnie:
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8yr_StC3uw[/youtube]
Sbrem:
wicked pissa as we say around here. I thought the gear was missing something, but a second glance told me it was supposed to be in the background, and not distract from other elements. Real nice.
Steve
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