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Dottonedan:
Evo, Thats some good feedback you provided on that art. Thats the type of communication I would like to build here. A place where someone can improve on what they started. A group suggestion is always better than one. So please keep up that good work.  When I first saw it, I took it that the top type was a 2ndary part of the info not realizing that it was part of this design. So my saying that tells allot. You need to consider how you would bring that in to the picture and make a a part of that design more.

I'd like to see what you've done on it again.

Dan

JBLUE:
I will try and post a pic later today. I did not have an option for the text to move it too much. There is some more text that went underneath it that is really ugly. They use the same font laid out the same way ever year. I would have loved to have made a lot of changes but my hands were pretty tied. All and all the customer loved them and they turned out pretty good. Thanks for all the feedback as well. Thats why I posted it up. There are a lot of talented folks here and its great to have other eyes take a look.

Chadwick:
Might want to consider moving the upper text lower, so that it overlaps the outside line of the border.
It will 'tie it all together' better.
Keep at it.
( good to hear someone realize this stuff takes a lot of work, and for that, you get a cookie  ;D )
Cheers.

* ah,  Chadwick should read all posts before posting.

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