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JBLUE:
Well here is my first real car rendering. I do not claim in any way shape or form to be an artist so feel free to let me have it. I usually send out this type of stuff but it is for an old trade program I attended in high school so I thought I would donate my time. I still need to add some more high lights and some finishing touches on the cars. I still have to bring in some more text and a background for the lower portion of the design. I should have it wrapped up later today. Now I know why these art guys charge so much. Well worth it.....lol

Dottonedan:
Looking good. I like the direction./Layout. Can't wait for more.

virgil427:
looks good, better highlites than i had with my first attempt

Evo:
Pretty damn good for a first run!

I'm no truck artist (like..at all) but visually here's what jumps out at me - take it all w/ a grain of salt:

Shadows under the vehicles should maybe be knocked down to a grey with feathered edges instead of inky black. It would make the hard black outlines of the vehicles pop more.

Text at the top should maybe drop down to over-lap the frame, or even curve into it somehow. Perhaps the frame can even contour around the text. That would tie it all together a bit.

"HOT ROD AND TRUCK SHOW" can be a bit bigger in proportion to the rest of the frame.


That's just my $0.02. As it is now I'm sure they will really dig it.

JBLUE:
I will update this in a bit. I appreciate the feedback. There is more text that goes in between the top text and the design. Its parked over in illustrator for now. Its pretty damn ugly but that part of the art is used every year and they dont want it changed so its all I have to work with. At least they let me put in a little chrome in it.I was going to feather the shadows already but I will try the gray. I like that idea. When its done I will throw it back up. Thanks again for the feedback.

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