That actually looks pretty good to me, you've got some EOM going on, and pretty good emulsion bridging between threads. You might try 2 scoop-coats on the shirt side and then 1 on the squeegee side. Remember the emulsion on the squeegee side should glisten and you should not be able to see the any mesh-look in it before doing your final coats on the squeegee side. If you want even more EOM, finish with 2 strokes on the squeegee side, but the pics you posted look alright.